some mini covers for ya'll

[unccrombie]

well the playing isn't perfect but I have some cool ideas.

Bartdender-->Dont Drink the Water:
http://www.itypical.com/john/BarDDTW.mp3

what I did here was play Bartender on downstrokes to mix it up a little. this was recorded with no high e string, on my old strings, because it snapped :(

Halloween-->Crush:
http://www.itypical.com/john/HalloCrush.mp3

dragged out Crush a bit too long. and any tips on the chorus would be nice. this was recorded with new strings which i put on last night

also, and most importantly how do they sound? not my guitar playing, i know that needs work. i just bought a new soundhole pickup and that's my reason for posting these songs. any feedback would be lovely

[unccrombie]

no replies?

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[PilotC150]

The pickup sounds awesome. I wish I could get mine to record into my computer, I can't for some reason. I should try again.

The playing, though, I have to make a few comments to try to help ya out.

Your rhythm on Bartender and Don't Drink the Water is off. Try listening to more solo recordings to get it right.

Halloween is right, but you need more intensity. :)

Crush is pretty good, just needs a bit more work to make the verse part flow better.

[unccrombie]

i played bartender wrong on purpose, but thanks for DDTW

do you have all the right cords to record into?