song i made....

[Jimithing2005]

i like to get some feedback on a song i wrote, i made it in about 10 minutes, it has poor sound quality though, i was using my shitty equipment and the cable that i connected my instuments to my PC with likes to switch from mono to stero as it pleases, i play lead guitar, rhythem guitar and bass in this, im a bassist by trade but i mess around on the acoustic once in a while, i just improved the whole song, it was made up on the spot so its pretty rough....


http://s4.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0NZ1QCGAKYATA0FDSWMEHCJ598

[Carbon Copy]

i like it . its rough but its got potential

[mcflymcflymcfly]

its a great little tune
any chance of some vocals being added?

[RyienKu]

Honestly, I liked it. Nothing special at this point, but I liked it.