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ulladulla28
03-26-2005, 05:00 PM
hey guys....after hearing American Baby I wrote a song the other day and I was hoping to get some feedback on it.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/matthewcailmusic.htm

Pat M
03-26-2005, 07:20 PM
Freakin' awesome. I really loved it. Awesome voice, and the melody is very orginal. It is very well put together. I wish you had better means of recording though. I'd love to hear this with a mic'd guitar.

but yeah, i loved it. i'm listening again actually. :)

harmonies are fabulous.

maveric29
03-26-2005, 07:26 PM
love the intro, definitly a good song, good lyrics. i like it

ulladulla28
03-26-2005, 07:35 PM
Hey thanks alot guys, I am thrilled you like it... You have made my day better lol....anyways me and a freind are actually recording a demo and I want to put that song on there, but we have actually already laid the groundwork down so I think it may be too late. If we get it on there I will be sure to post a studio version of the song.... :)

Thanks alot

Matt cail

Overmetal
03-28-2005, 03:35 PM
Awesome song man.. a good mic'ed recording would definatly be worth it. Keep on playin..

DaveHead36
03-28-2005, 08:24 PM
The song is really good. The only thing I would change is to lose the effect on the vocal, sounds like some kind of really fast flange. Also during the oooh ahhhh parts, shorten the delay because the delay is carrying the other vocal over and slightly clashing with what you're currently singing. If that makes sense. But I really like the song. Sounds great.

ulladulla28
03-28-2005, 10:02 PM
Thanks guys.....Yeh I do need to master the effects...I just got a digitech delay pedal and I am still learning the basics of it...Thanks for your input.....

DriveOut
03-29-2005, 01:17 AM
This is really good stuff. Keep it up man, you've got talent. :thumbsup