My original - Please critique!

[dreamingtree15]

I wrote this one on piano, then added the bass, drums, etc. It's a pretty simple song, not one of my best, but I wanted to see what you think

http://s2.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1OQGYDOT3VC982YQC7RFGMB0NM

Please just give it a listen and see what you think.

Thanks a lot!!

Alex

[cptnhansel]

its a very happy song; you need to put more push into your vocals (and turn em up a little)...

overall... 6 out of 10... not bad.

[dreamingtree15]

Thanks! You are the first person to actually listen to my song, because I haven't quite figured out YSI yet, and the link apparently goes out almost right away, but you caught it before it did.

I didn't really want to post this one, but my best song is 7:10 long and most people don't want to download something that big.

Here's the updated link for anyone else if they'd like to give it a listen

hxxp://s42.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0DZ39RKNUBV7C242QP20HCXBQ4

Copy and paste it into your browser, then change the hxxp to http.

Thanks!

Alex

[acost3]

It was very upbeat and happy. It was a little i dunno how you explain it ummm bar music kinda. Like folkish but if thats what you were going for then its damn good. I dunno if you can sum it up as country barrish but a little bit but otherwise very very good. kudosss bitchess

AC

[acost3]

It was very upbeat and happy. It was a little i dunno how you explain it ummm bar music kinda. Like folkish but if thats what you were going for then its damn good. I dunno if you can sum it up as country barrish but a little bit but otherwise very very good. kudosss bitchess

AC