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KevinTH5
10-11-2005, 08:41 PM
wrote this last night and was real excited about it so i skipped my last class today o record it. hope you enjoy.

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HelloAgainC2
10-11-2005, 09:13 PM
very very unique.... sounded pretty damn good to me... you definately have your own sound... not quite my style, but I think you are talented for sure... again VERY UNIQUE... and everything was quality, you know what you wnat and you got it... nice job:thumbsup :thumbsup
KevinTH5
10-11-2005, 09:21 PM
thank you very much
wvumascotdmb
10-11-2005, 09:24 PM
I listened....and i'm sorry but that's about all i did was listen. No dance....no movement at all...sorry once again...to much crap going on at once
ercdmb
10-11-2005, 09:27 PM
I listened....and i'm sorry but that's about all i did was listen. No dance....no movement at all...sorry once again...to much crap going on at once

boy do i agree with this. the guitar in the beginning was great but it just got too busy
1suitewhirled
10-11-2005, 10:30 PM
2 words....MORE COWBELL!!!!!
HolyCow
10-11-2005, 10:49 PM
boy do i agree with this. the guitar in the beginning was great but it just got too busy

i agree as well.

I dig the voice, the guitar and the sound. But I caught myself not listening to any lyrics because i was being hit by so much at the same time. Cut down on a few of the effect and you have a winner :thumbsup.

Personally, I am a fan of a stripped down raw sound instead of a "band" sound. If that makes sense.
Carbon Copy
10-12-2005, 12:05 AM
the guitar rift is so good that it shouldnt be jumbled by those electronic sounds.
mavonw
10-12-2005, 01:56 AM
i thought it was pretty damn cool..good voice, song started off really strong. i even like the "hey yaaah" or whatever it is, very catchy. i really like how you open up the second verse (woooo - 1:06)..you got into it..sounded good.
wvumascotdmb
10-12-2005, 12:12 PM
YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH You know i thought i would give this song one more chance and well i did....for a minute at least! Until I realized that this song is just Dreamgirl's UGLY UGLY COUSIN!!!!!!! HEY YAAAAAAAAAAAAH HEY YAAAAAAAAAAH BLAH BLAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
som3d3vil34
10-12-2005, 12:38 PM
Thats just harsh^^^
ChadRap127
10-12-2005, 06:38 PM
Reminds me of "Oh" And "American Baby" Put Together (The Guitar Intro-Verse)
jk333
10-12-2005, 10:11 PM
its not really that good... lyrics seem almost really good but not developed enough... same with everything in the song, it just doesn't seem ready yet.

but you have by far the most potential of most people i've heard on this board... not necessarily this song either, just over all songwriting ability. post some more... and strip down the effects, just a shade.
hotniks160
10-13-2005, 12:09 AM
real nice beginning keep it simple....nice courage to post but as everyone else has said get rid of the extra instruments and get rid of the ya ya ya stuff....and that damn cowbell get rid of it focus more on your strength in guitar and vocals