Songs finally posted

[1suitewhirled]

I probably shouldnt be starting a new thread for this (see the My Band's Website thread) but I thought this way people would actually hear these. These are two of my band's (www.thegrassrootsrevival.tk (http://www.thegrassrootsrevival.tk)) songs. We are a full band (2guitars, bass, drums) but these recordings are just me(vocals, rhythm) and my bandmate and fellow ant dan (lead guitar, username bindle). These are two of the songs we recorded a while ago for our initial demo. They are in m4a format(not sure what that is). Just thought I'd see what you guys think.

anywhere-http://s39.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3V5W09H4KJ2VE11MDS4KYBV59L (http://s39.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3V5W09H4KJ2VE11MDS4KYBV59L)

deep water-http://s39.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2ATXLJB5WZVX02WLZ8UZ8EGQAX (http://s39.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2ATXLJB5WZVX02WLZ8UZ8EGQAX)

by the way, music and lyrics for both songs copyright Tony Brown, 2005, All Rights Reserved

[1suitewhirled]

if you guys have listned, would you please tell me what you think?

[freddykrueger]

needs more life to it. edit out some of the intro and long stuff. unless the song has a massively catchy lick or an extended chord period where multiple instruments can jam (you only have guitars). otherwise keep your songs between 2.5-4.5, 5 minutes. but overall needs some life.