My First Original Recordings

[DMBScarecrow]

I've been playing for a little less than a year. This is just guitar music that I assembled. tell me what you think. They're mp3's.

song 1
http://s24.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0Q0DN20Z9KVTI27BJXWFYAAD30

song 2
http://s26.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=02X6X6FQKS7XB3CRQVQEIEYIP9

song 3
http://s26.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3KFBU76EHJ0RJ2T28ANQZLSC1V

song 4
http://s26.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1FTOYRBMYHEBV02ZXDLQEG4HWJ

song 5
http://s26.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1YRWSSGA0N1ZU3ABM298KNV5A7

any comments would be cool.

[chr35919]

the first one sounds like a very loose cover of #41 or if not it sounds very similar in some parts...I don't know if that was intentional...but I liked the second one

[seohwang]

First one is lot like #41 the second is lot like Satellite and the third is lot like Rhyme and Reason. I like what you got going but try to branch out and own your own voiving on the guitar. God knows it is freakin' hard as hell to write a riff and you've obviously been playing for a while. Their all very good technically but just needs to be tweaked a little bit. Good luck!! I'm sure you can write awsome stuff.

Paul

[lazzarasoccer]

ur stuff is really good but u need to work on ur rythem and tone......its really good if uve been playin for a year ive been playin for about a year and it took me half a year to learn how to play all of dave matthews stuff. i learn really fast. i also learned all of the stuff on the violin. but like i said just work on the beat, keep a steady tempo.

[DMBScarecrow]

thanks for the comments guys. the first one does sound like 41 in some parts, it really needs some work.

I do need to work on my rythem, thank you for pointing that out.

[chr35919]

the first one does sound like 41 in some parts, it really needs some work.


it was well played despite that...i liked it