Comment on my Song (Please!)...

[Panoramical]

It's nothing special really, I don't like it much compared to my others. But I thought I'd post it here anyway:
http://www.fileupyours.com/files/29635/My%20Music/By%20The%20Sea.mp3
It's called By the Sea...not that that matters.
Thanks

[nakedguydmb]

it's not bad. it's not my thing really, though. from a musical point of view, the guitar tone is pretty annoying. the voice gets pretty pitchy in some places (especially held-out notes). the falsetto was a little awkward, but sounded okay. it doesn't really have a hook and it just kind of repeats itself again and again. i don't feel like there's much that stands out.

[Panoramical]

You're right, it's not a great song. I wrote it when I was 9 so I guess that's why...

[jimibadfish]

You're right, it's not a great song. I wrote it when I was 9 so I guess that's why...

Have you written anything since you were nine?

[Panoramical]

Have you written anything since you were nine?
Yes, I have: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=345982
I've written more, and I'd really like to properly record them. I'm 15 now...
(http://www.myspace.com/atlusmusic)

[jimibadfish]

Keep working, dude. You'll be great one day.