2 New Songs (Tell me what you really think)

[Seanieb]

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=638771

2 songs are "Hold me Down" and "Lullaby"

For some reason, I liked these songs last week, but this week not so much. Should I shelve these tunes or what. I recorded them on my computer today so I could get some feedback.

Thanks!

[Alazais]

I jammed hard to Hold me Down. Definitely a good tune. a few times the first note of your vocal line was off key but you usually recovered fairly quickly with a nice tone. Overall man I'd say Hold me Down is a definite keeper.

[nakedguydmb]

hold me down's riff was pretty dave-ish, but i liked it overall. melody was pretty decent and the vocals sounded pretty good.

lullaby i didn't like as much. it wasn't quite as focused and you had some spotty vocal issues.

i wasn't a huge fan of the lyrics on either, but i liked hold me down better in that regard - especially because i didn't like the "hush little baby" and following bit in lullaby.