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41 Step
12-21-2007, 11:22 AM
Here's a demo I recorded of my arrangement of Grey Street. It's kind of rough, esp. on the voice, but I think it holds its own. I wasn't really trying that hard anyway. Feel free to offer any comments, criticism, etc.

http://www.sendspace.com/file/xwutqg

CrashDMB237
12-21-2007, 11:33 AM
I like the fact that you slowed it down and made some little tweaks here and there.... but some of those vocals man, ouch, I almost took the plunge out of my 10th floor window on the "YEAAA" at the end. I know you said you weren't really trying, so I guess it doesn't really matter that much. But like I said, I like what you did with it.

41 Step
12-21-2007, 11:38 AM
Yeah, those high notes are really rough, especially the high A (BOLD). I haven't really sung in awhile so my voice is kind of out of shape. I could probably do a bit better if I gave it a couple other takes and maybe tuned down a half-step. The point I'm making with this demo is my variation on the structure of the song. Thanks for the comments. :thumbsup