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bennettr
03-30-2008, 09:41 PM
Hey,

Thought I would make a thread incase I keep updating it... Tell me what you think of my stuff

http://www.myspace.com/musicbyrayray

bennettr
03-30-2008, 09:42 PM
I still have part of rapunzel and satellite up, but I just added #41.. I think I did a swell job, it's better than I every thought I could sing it. I know some parts are a little off, but let me know what you think! thanks!

bennettr
03-31-2008, 02:23 PM
anyone?

Dobler
03-31-2008, 03:23 PM
i would listen to it right now but i am in the school library, i will check it out when i get home for sure!!

bennettr
03-31-2008, 03:35 PM
i would listen to it right now but i am in the school library, i will check it out when i get home for sure!!

Thanks, my modal friend. :thumbsup

Dobler
03-31-2008, 07:56 PM
Thanks, my modal friend. :thumbsup

not too shabby, i think you are definitely better with the higher notes and the YEAAAHHS on 41. a few of the low notes are a bit off, not to bad at all though. I think you should use some overdubbing next time so you can hear the guitar a bit better, then you can overdub some guitar solos and a few lead parts (in G major, aka G ionian for 41).