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Pat7600
08-02-2002, 03:17 AM
Since I didn't see any threads on this subject I figured I would start one up. I thought that we could share some of the songs we've written or tell each other what you think of someone else's work. Also, no one better try to steal someone's songs. This is one of my songs I wrote recently. I think I might call it "More Every Day"

(Verse #1)
When all I want
is to tell her
I'm still in love
I only say
"Can we still
be friends?"
She'll try.
But, her trying
isn't too much
and most likely
isn't enough.

(Chorus #1)
I love her more
with every day
passing me by.
Having feelings
that she's seeing
another guy.
It isn't fair
but, I guess that's life.

(Verse #2)
Haven't spoken to her in weeks
haven't seen her in months
and, still she is what I want.
I'm looking for the answer,
the answer to a riddle
no one can resolve.
When everyone tell me
"Only time will tell"
I'm only convinced
time is no longer
on my side.

(Chorus #2)
Loving her more
with every day
passing me by.
It's driving me
to hostility.
Never a quiet time
when she's always
on my mind

(Verse #3)
I thought she was it,
thought she was the one.
Said she loved me
the day before
she was gone.
To hear her
enjoy those words
just once more,
and simply to say
"I love you more"
all over again.

(Bridge #1)
Maybe my dreams are wrong.
Maybe my love is too strong.
But, I can't help
Dreaming of you
And I can't help
Being in love with you.
Dreams mean nothing
if they don't contain you.
Love means nothing
if it's without you.
Let me be nothing
with you and I'll be happy.

(Chorus #3)
What I need is
what i won't get,
and what I need
is you, I need you.
It isn't fair.
But, I guess that's life.

suprman
08-02-2002, 06:43 PM
there was a dog who had a name and bingo was his name-o

b-i-n-g-o, b-i-n-g-o, b-i-n-g-o and bingo was his name-o


still a work in progress but it'll be done soon. i think it's pretty original, anyone every hear it?

:lol

PilotC150
08-03-2002, 02:21 AM
Originally posted by suprman
there was a dog who had a name and bingo was his name-o

b-i-n-g-o, b-i-n-g-o, b-i-n-g-o and bingo was his name-o


still a work in progress but it'll be done soon. i think it's pretty original, anyone every hear it?

:lol


I'm gonna have to hear what kinda melody you have going along with that before I can make a decision....

perfectturmoil
08-03-2002, 02:11 PM
Held

I stand here on the edge
Looking at a world of black
Each time I turn away
I find myself a turning back
Some day I may find myself
A way to loose these tying chains
Cast them off my head
But I keep coming back once again

Here I I’m held
Trapped by force internal
I can not escape
From this life infernal
Why can’t I get away?
From this small kernel of my life
I am held I am held

It’s like there are shackles
That are on my ankles firm
And each time I try to leave
The stinging pain cause me to squirm
I sure would love but something is tied on to me
Its like a ghost or a demon
Invisible force I can not see

Here I I’m held
Trapped by force internal
I can not escape
From this life infernal
Why can’t I get away?
From this small kernel of my life
I am held I am held

Why won’t someone help me now?
I can’t find my way out
If I believed that it would help
I would let out a shout
I want to find my way to you
But binding force is strong
So won’t you lend a hand?
To me it will not be too long

Here I I’m held
Trapped by force internal
I can not escape
From this life infernal
Why can’t I get away?
From this small kernel of my life
I am held I am held

suprman
08-03-2002, 04:45 PM
Originally posted by PilotC150



I'm gonna have to hear what kinda melody you have going along with that before I can make a decision....

it's kind of a happy melody, kind of kid oriented, not really sure yet though

DreamingTree34
08-03-2002, 05:09 PM
i dont know about postin lyrics to your own songs, i wont post any of mine....some shady bastards out there wont hesistate to snake your lyrics....next thing ya knwo ya go a #5 song on TRL witha guy singin your shit:p :lol