Some lyrics I wrote, let me know what y'all think

[hespig01]

Maybe I’m a dreamer, oh
And maybe you’re an angel, angel
Maybe I’ve been wrong
Maybe you’re so right
But maybe I’m just scared, scared of this
Maybe I’m deceiving, oh
And maybe you’re the devil, devil
Maybe these colors are changing
Maybe it’s all been said before
But maybe I’m tired, tired of this
And I feel high
Come back to me
Where have you gone?
And even though I, I stay strong
Where have you gone?
Come back, play the day
I can’t see you
Maybe I can’t see
Where have you gone?
Maybe I’m unreliable, oh
And maybe you’re a hero, hero
Maybe I’m blind
Maybe the day has lost its truth
But maybe we’re just lonely, lonely from this
And I feel high
Lay lonely wide awake
Kissing lips as we replace
Words, words, are mumbling me
Eyes wide, too tired to dream
Staring helplessly blind
Tiny, tiny steps are taking me
Down, down, down
Down, down, down
Away from you
Maybe I'm a dreamer, oh
But maybe it's not me its you

[JBIRD81]

They all sound like clips of lyrics from dave songs, its pretty good, id like to here how you incorperated them into a song

[WesDutchMaster]

the first line had me singing Imagine by John Lennon. There def is a lot of Dave feeling lines in there. Maybe it would be good when heard in song with music but right now I'd say it's a little trite.

[cj4258]

*puts on Lennon-goggles*

They say I'mmmm a dreamer....

But I'm not the only onneeee.....

Good lyrics. It's a good healthy mix of dave and others.

[DreamingTree34]

i think a lot of people write about girls nowadays....

[DMBand520]

Originally posted by DreamingTree34
i think a lot of people write about girls nowadays....

It's funny you say that b/c almost every song i've written has been about a girl. They are the only things that inspire me enough to write lyrics about, lol.

[DreamingTree34]

I'm not sayin it's neccesarily a bad thing..I think it's jsut what's easy for some people....that's all Howie Day writes about...and when you're at that level you need to have more variety