Original Song

[johnbro23]

Hey everyone, this is my first song I actually finished. Its only a minute because I just played the verse/chorus/verse. Theres somewhat of a bridge in there I think. Well I'm a beginner so with that said, don't expect anything great. Heres the link:

http://www.angelfire.com/pa5/johnbro23/OrigSong1.mp3

Thanks for the help,

John B.

[tdowe99]

Not bad at all. :thumbsup
Now you just need to finish it up with lyrics.

Tony | dmbvideos.com

[dmbzosojazz41]

sounds like a mix between crash and stay or leave, its really good

[gregory311]

That's really nice. I like it very much. Let us know when you finish it and be sure to post it here.

Nice job!

J.

[acmorgan]

it said it's not working for some reason

EDIT: "Temporarily Suspended"

[johnbro23]

Thanks for the comments. I was excited about this one, I thought it sounded good. It def sounds like some DMB song, but oh well. I don't know about writing lyrics. I need some inspiration. Nothing really that inspirational has happened to me in my 16 years. Anyone have any tips?

acmorgan, I'm kinda sick of Angelfire since its always down. I put it up on a different Angelfire account if the other one is still down.

http://www.angelfire.com/music5/johnbro23/OrigSong1.mp3