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[dpresti]

Only my 2nd recording..

let me know what you think.


http://www.freewebs.com/dpresti/

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[ChadRap127]

damn, the server is fast actually :)

[johnbro23]

I liked the new rhythm you put to it. You voice sounds pretty good too. That outro sounds amazing. Dave should do something like that.

The only thing I'd say you need to work on is the buzzing strings, and executing the chords. I think when you play the (4) on the low E string is when it buzzes. My guitar does that too, so it could be just your guitar's fault.

But other than that it sounds great. Keep it up.

[dpresti]

I liked the new rhythm you put to it. You voice sounds pretty good too. That outro sounds amazing. Dave should do something like that.

The only thing I'd say you need to work on is the buzzing strings, and executing the chords. I think when you play the (4) on the low E string is when it buzzes. My guitar does that too, so it could be just your guitar's fault.

But other than that it sounds great. Keep it up.


thanks for the comments, i'll be posting some videos soon.

and the low E does buzz on that chord cuz i cant reach it that well yet, its a stretch for me. and i love that ending i put to it, it was pretty much spure of the moment too! glad i recorded cuz now other can copy and i can play it like that from now on. :)

[nonewdirections]

it's a good effort but you're forgetting a chord (a standard C) before the E

[PilotC150]

Well you're definatly on the right track. nonewdirections is right, you are missing a chord, and it really screws with things. Also, you need to practice more to get it to flow, it seems like you are struggling the whole way through make things match up and move your hands fast enough to get to the next chord.

Just some things to work on, but like i said, you've definatly on the right track.

[johnbro23]

After I think about it, I think you are missing that C chord before the E. Other than that it sounds pretty good. Im lookin forwar to some videos!

[Parker]

it does sound as if you are piecing it together most of the way. but it is hard to sing and play so keep it up. it just didnt sound too crisp and the very end was choppy.

not tryin to be too harsh, just being honest.

[dpresti]

all of my recordings are done where i record the guitar 1st then vocals over top of that