Lover Lay down cover inside

[dpresti]

another recording by me..

comments welcome.

thanks.

lover lay down (http://www.angelfire.com/film/snerek/dploverlaydown.mp3)

[Haiku Jimi]

The guitar starts out fine but then you get really choppy on your slides, especially when you start singing. You have to work on sliding more smoothly instead of just hitting the chord and muting it. The choppiness seems to make you lose your rhythm; sometimes you'd strum on the wrong beat. As for the chorus, you're playing it differently it seems, are you sure you have the right tab? www.dmbtabs.com, check it out.

I liked your voice though, it was pretty much right on...except when you held that one note, "share this smiiile", on smile, it sounded funny :) But you have a nice voice in general.

LLD is a tough one to get right, rhythmically I think, but keep it up.

[greppson]

i agree with haiku jimi.

are you keeping your fingers on the strings for the slides?

[dpresti]

yeah i keep all my fingers on for the slide, i prolly doesnt sound the best.

and i've been playing the chorus A E G Bm

and i record separately, guitar, then vocals

[MDFdmb50]

good start, needs a little work though.
yeah I'd look into the chorus tabs they did sound different.
good luck

[Cordevil95]

Yeah.. the guitar sounds choppy... the song needs to me smmoooooothe there should really be no silence or muting in the verses.